This replay in my head
tired, inescapable
Past
built upon
past
Run away
cannot stay
to play your sordid game
Let me out
wicked world
I never asked for this.
February 2, 2009 by Sarah Joyce Bryant
This replay in my head
tired, inescapable
Past
built upon
past
Run away
cannot stay
to play your sordid game
Let me out
wicked world
I never asked for this.
I like how you are getting more economy of words–each poem I see of yours seems to have more focus. This ending had a big impact for me. I think i would like to see this poem fleshed out more with concrete images–that turn we talk about in class from time to time–it’s there!